You recently wrote the following sentance in one of your articles.
"Tobias Harris recently led Long Island Lutheran High School to their first Class A championship over a very game and competitive Jamesville DeWitt team."
http://www.newyorksportswriters.org/reference/boys_hoops_champs_feds.shtml
If you care to take a looksie at that link, you will see that 2009 marked Long Island Lutheran's FIFTH Federation championship, their third in class A; certainly not their first title.
So because I know journalistic integrity is of the utmost importance to you, and that you go to bed every night with a copy of Strunk and White's Elements of Style... and I also know you're a very busy man, so I've taken the liberty of rewriting the incorrect passage for you.
"Tobias Harris recently helped lead Long Island Lutheran High School to their third Class A Federation championship, fifth overall, over a talented yet surprisingly non-competitive Jamesville DeWitt team, who were down double digits for the majority of the game."
There you go. Hope all is well.
Hugs and Kisses.
This post was edited on 4/23 9:46 AM by LIHoopsfan
This post was edited on 4/23 9:46 AM by LIHoopsfan
Federation Championships over the Years
"Tobias Harris recently led Long Island Lutheran High School to their first Class A championship over a very game and competitive Jamesville DeWitt team."
http://www.newyorksportswriters.org/reference/boys_hoops_champs_feds.shtml
If you care to take a looksie at that link, you will see that 2009 marked Long Island Lutheran's FIFTH Federation championship, their third in class A; certainly not their first title.
So because I know journalistic integrity is of the utmost importance to you, and that you go to bed every night with a copy of Strunk and White's Elements of Style... and I also know you're a very busy man, so I've taken the liberty of rewriting the incorrect passage for you.
"Tobias Harris recently helped lead Long Island Lutheran High School to their third Class A Federation championship, fifth overall, over a talented yet surprisingly non-competitive Jamesville DeWitt team, who were down double digits for the majority of the game."
There you go. Hope all is well.
Hugs and Kisses.
This post was edited on 4/23 9:46 AM by LIHoopsfan
This post was edited on 4/23 9:46 AM by LIHoopsfan
Federation Championships over the Years